1.
Make a sphere
Spin it as quickly as possible
Until you can hear it hum
And wait for the center to collapse
Watch dimples form at the poles
Until the sphere becomes a donut
When you see the hourglass
Pluck it from the image
Remove the bottom from each side
And dump out the sand
How did we get here?
Staring at time like it was some thing
We could hold in our hand
Instead of sand slipping through
A clutching grasp
And fingers that shatter
As easily as glass
2.
Lay cake peer
Spin it as prickly as paws a ball
Until you can hear it bum
And weight for the sinner to co-lapse
Watch dimples for-matt the poles
Until the square be-comes a daw-nut
When you sea the our-glass
Pluck it from the I'm-age
Remove the bottom from each side
And dump out the sand
How did we get hair?
Staring at thyme like it was some zing
We could hold in our band
Instead of band slipping through
A clutching grass.
3.
Grey jake beer
Spin it as prickly as paws a brawl
Until you can hear a drum
And weight for the sinner to co-lapse
Watch dimples for-matt the poles
Until the sphere be-comes a dawn-nut
When you sea the hourg-lass
Luck it from the I'm-age
Remove the bottom from each side
And jump out the sand
Hound did we get hair?
Staring at time like it was some zing
We could hold in our bland
Instead of band flipping through
A clutching gas.
4.
Loi kook poor
Spun at us pracklu us pus us bull
Ontoll yoo kun hoir ut bom
Und wite for thi sennor tu cullopso
Wotch doplos firmot thi pules
Ontoll thi spori bocomis i dinot
Whin yoo soo thi hiorgoss
Plack ot frum thi omogi
Rimovi thi battom frum iech sidi
Ond damp out thi sind
Hurd dod wo gut hir?
Storing ot tomo loki ot wis somo zong
Wi cuold hild on our bind
Instiod of bind slippung thruogh
O clitchong gos.
5.
Flowing brook lure,
Spun at a sprightly pace like a bull
Anticipate the sound of the drum
And wait for the moment of collapse
See ripples form at the banks
Until the stream transforms into a delta
When you glimpse the sandglass
Pluck it from the image
Jump in the sand
And relax
You are home
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So, for this poem, the first stanza was what the kids call "cyphered". But, the following stanzas are all algorithmically generated using phonetic paraphasia. The language because more and more disjointed until the last stanza. The third and fourth stanzas are reptitions on the second. However, for the fourth stanza, I asked ChatGPT to find real words to replace the nonsense words.
I ended up completing the poem after a server error stopped it. I really liked what it had started and after I asked it to try again, nothing was the same. It had nowhere near the same feel as lines like ripples from the banks, and the moment of collapse. I kept the original, broken text and completed it.
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